The three sentence story
I have stood a silent spectator to a mass of people, who generation after generation have bungled through the centuries, bearing witness to all their Ecstasy, despair, riches, poverty even the private battles of those men and women whose great valor and spirit may never again be seen on this earth, always remaining a record defying even that swift tide of time.
But that swift tide moves on, memories are forgotten, friends disappear, 'legends' become 'tales', and one small slip from grace, they forget all loyalties, those whom I had guarded, come back with heavy ammunition and iron monsters with steel teeth.
It's tough being a historical building in India, first it is the graffiti, then it gets more colorful, then obscene and then the bulldozers step in.
But that swift tide moves on, memories are forgotten, friends disappear, 'legends' become 'tales', and one small slip from grace, they forget all loyalties, those whom I had guarded, come back with heavy ammunition and iron monsters with steel teeth.
It's tough being a historical building in India, first it is the graffiti, then it gets more colorful, then obscene and then the bulldozers step in.
19 Comments:
Absolutely amazing :)...!
By Sarit, at 9:46 AM
yes :>
By ghostrider, at 8:27 PM
yes :>
By ghostrider, at 8:27 PM
so u got one story added in your profile ... :)
By prem, at 2:00 AM
Hey Amie,
I came here via your comment on my blog.
From whatever little I have seen over here,I must say you have a flair for writing.
Keep it up...
By Sameer, at 11:16 PM
heay what u suddenly stopped blogging kya?
By prem, at 10:22 PM
heay, have u stopped blogging kya?
By prem, at 10:22 PM
I love how you twist the end. Certainly wonderful :) Thanks for dropping by at my place... Rgrds
By nakedwriter, at 5:36 PM
ok.. first things first, thanx for dropping by at me blog..
Secondly,
gr8 thoughts that have been transformed into quite impressive prose n poetry. That wud b my nutshell-description of dis blog.good job dudette!
Quite impressive. Wel done.
I rarely say this to people i know not, for dey myt take offense, but dont yu tink we must rather be proud of d world we live in, rather than merely our country? this is of course in conexion to d secularism post... hmm.
newae, no qualms about havin visited here. gr8 job...
By Dj, at 6:12 PM
Amie,great blog here.Do you have msn?
By Anonymous, at 3:51 PM
hey samantha!
yeah I do have msn.. but how can I mail it to u?
Chittz
By Chittz, at 11:22 PM
hello whr r u soo mnay days no posts
By ghostrider, at 4:06 PM
You've got a good thing going here now don't you???
Will be back for more!
By TS, at 1:07 PM
Hmmmm... Short, sweet and subtle. Makes quite an impact. Keep writing.
By Viren, at 8:52 PM
Hey thats one of the most different writing attempts i've seen in a long time. Keep up he good work..nice blog btw
By Vijay Narain, at 6:03 PM
Hi, am Abhyudaya from The Kibitzer Caboodle community on Orkut. Hmm... nice writings....
At first, I thought... awww... self-exalting silent spectator stuff.. then, in the second para, I read... ooo... typical teen frustrations about nothing.
In the last para.... my castle of prejudices collapsed. Nice work!
By Abhyudaya, at 1:08 PM
......the machine can graze only what lies above - so superficial. Beneath the new glitters lies a graveyard of bricks...a strong foundation.
In reality they'd probably dig out and rebuild the foundation....but like the bricks i'd rather cling on to foolish hopes.
By Raj, at 8:25 AM
Good one. Wonder what the Taj will have to say about this.
By the Monk, at 3:18 PM
everyone...this is just a boaaaast...but since witnessing her writing for the first time.....(which is neither an english class assignment nor an speed writing peice!!!) i just want to say...she's my friend!!!!!!!!!
Thats how much im proud of you....you take my breath away da!
with one last phrase i shall stop being idotic but i am still in shock of reading all your posts at a single go to make sense of the world now so.....
you're unbelievable!!!
By Anonymous, at 8:06 PM
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